Open Windows
...a poem about false hope in spring
We have flung open windows, though it is still cold; forgotten our gloves in the pockets of bigger coats. We have set out earlier, come home later, as if the days are longer and not just lighter. We have counted our chickens; daffodils in hedgerows, blackbirds in pairs, three consecutive days without rain. We have adjusted our clocks; sacrificed an hour to this seasonal God. The sky looks somehow bigger now, though the horizon hasn’t shifted. The sky looks somehow hopeful now, though the news still drops its daily kills at our door, like a cat.
The Tideline
I was commissioned to write a poem about Spring (more on that later!). I wrote a few and this is one they didn’t choose. It’s about fool’s spring and the false hope offered at this time of year.
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Oh I love this! Where can we read the piece that was selected? (Congrats on that!)
Powerful piece. I’ve been particularly drawn to brevity lately, and evocative metaphors like your final line.